MIKAN

By ongushi@hotmail.com

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Date Added: 21st June 2014
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Mikan is a magical witch, Taurus and blood type O. Age was not recorded,
although as a little witch but when compared with humans, age seems to be about 200 years.

Mikan is a little witch who has both very high talent and Cosmo power,
believed to be the witch over witches or the highest god of the witches that it happened once in 5000 years.
Mikan can use difficult magic spell and a variety of techniques
that the genius witches cannot do it such as chanting an incantation,
cursing and creating strange and magnificent artwork which makes people easily enchanted and stunned.
Now, i am pleased to invite you to have an enjoyment and impression in a small world but be filled
with the power of Mikan's imagination at www.facebook.com/onimikan

www.ongushi.com
Big Scene: www.ongushi.com/images/inweb/2014/2014_02_mikan_hd.jpg
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Ongushi on Mon, 23 June 2014 3:00pm
thank you for your suggestion
you can visit more work at
http://www.ongushi.com//2014/2014_02_mikan.html
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Rob on Sat, 21 June 2014 2:16pm
The physical scene is good. However, the varying texture fidelity is distracting. You go from high quality to low quality too quickly. IMO, there should have been more consistency.

On top of that, you make the same mistake with many of your images. You give this whole story in the text. The problem with that is the image should tell the entire story. If you have to explain the image then the visuals aren't doing the job. The image should stand on its own.

For example, all of the story being told here & the description of the character... None of that comes through in the image. Without the text, all I see is some anime teen (?) girl sitting at her computer in her very cluttered room. That whole witch & Cosmo thing doesn't even remotely come through here. Her age age either. Not even a hint.

Writers have an old saying: "Show. Don't tell." A scene is more effective that way.

I like the modeling and much of tthe texturing. The scene is a bit cramped, but it's all still good. I'm just not getting the story. Again, this is a problem in many of your images.
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